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VoBuFilm Logotype: Concept One by Thrill-Seeker VoBuFilm Logotype: Concept One by Thrill-Seeker
My first concept for VoBu Film - a German film/documentary company.
I would VER much appreciate a critique :)
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:iconlexaria:
Hi, nice job. I looked the logotype and see that you need some criticise so goin' on;

I think that the play symbol already works for filming or something like that kind of concepts. But there is nothing more that we can take any point about concept or subject. Only a play button, that can be a music company or something. What all we can take is play. Typography can not give us anything else too. Also typography has a readebility problem in smaller sizes. If you can minimize that for 25 percent its really hard to take any information about concept or and sense. It can be a connection between play symbol and typography so we can take a better vision, and something more about concept, company. I think the symbol needs more categorized, directly indicate to concept.

Sorry for my bad English. Best regards..
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Lydia-distracted Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2010   General Artist
Great work.
This piece has been added to the favorites of :iconawesome-fonts: :)
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woweek Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2009
Very cool logotype! :)
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Thrill-Seeker Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2009  Professional Photographer
thanks dude - that means a hell of a lot to me coming from you - your work is amazing.
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Survulus Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2009
Simple but really nicely done I think, especially the sue of the play button.
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Survulus Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2009
*use
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Arcius-Azrael Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
lol, when at looked at the word 'film', I immediately thought it's a video clip. I waited for 1 min before realizing it's a pic.

It looks simple and cool. But I think the icon (triangle) need to be something more unique.
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